lyrics:
embers to the fire i've
kept for 7000 years
gradually diminish
--
what am i going
to become and should i be scared
is dying pure misfortune
--
it breaks us and it binds us
is this all perpetual
i've become the od old on
I feel like some EQing could really benefit this track. Basically anything that isn't a bass, cut somewhere from 140-500Hz. It'll help with some of the clipping issues, and give everything it's own space in the mix
Also when dealing with vocals, I'd cut anything under 300-400Hz. And make a notch at 7KHz (That's where the 'S' sounds is). Though, your vocals don't have any harsh 'S' sounds. The vocals could be a tad bit brighter as well (4KHz-10KHz)
The intro is clipping as well, but idk if that's the style of this track. It might be cool to have the pong/blip sound in the intro have some stereo width, that or ping pong pan it every now and then
onward is powerful~
I feel like some EQing could really benefit this track. Basically anything that isn't a bass, cut somewhere from 140-500Hz. It'll help with some of the clipping issues, and give everything it's own space in the mix
Totally agree. Cleaning up the low mids and trimming down the bass frequencies makes a massive difference. It gives to a ton of headroom as well.
Overall, really fucking beautiful. You just need to work on your EQing a bunch
Also when dealing with vocals, I'd cut anything under 300-400Hz. And make a notch at 7KHz (That's where the 'S' sounds is). Though, your vocals don't have any harsh 'S' sounds. The vocals could be a tad bit brighter as well (4KHz-10KHz)
The intro is clipping as well, but idk if that's the style of this track. It might be cool to have the pong/blip sound in the intro have some stereo width, that or ping pong pan it every now and then
Also at the pad could also use an EQ. Cut 200-400Hz
The arps do not need lowend. Cut somewhere from 300-800Hz for the arps
wow
that pad at is beautiful
stark contrast to the previous track, wow.
thanks
This is truly something else. Probably my favorite ambient works on AT.