CRITIQUE ME AS HARD AS YOU CAN THIS IS FOR A SPECIAL OCCASION! I'M PLAYING SOME SONGS WITH MY FRIEND AT MY "SHOW AND TELL" THINGIE AND I'M ALSO TRYING TO IMPRESS A GIRL :P
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FINALLY DONE
I showed my songs in homeroom at the end of last year, and their starting to lean more into trap..... a bunch of freinds from different places (mainly from the west coast) (thats where i live) agree with me, and even flame me for my love of dnb, electro, and dubstep.
Hey bby..... other people like trap these days, so i got flamed for showing them a dnb song..... so dont make the same mistake i did..... try adding a more middle synth.... thers a lot of highs and lows in the intro, but no middle.....
needs improvement. add a bassline with a light wobble to it. Also use different synths for the intro chords. Sounds a little bland. Make it to where the chords fade into a lowpass to get that dramatic effect. I also recommend using a different pluck. Try using my knock pluck preset. You can alter that if you want. Give this a small dramatic intro too. I hope this helped!
@Luminoux The class begged whilst me and my friend were on fl studio in the back so we got volunTOLD to do show and tell of a new song on monday but we had to work by ourselves ;-;
throwwwwwwbaaack
@s k u l thank you
might remix this...
Maybe.... ill try.....
@______ thanks xD
I'll remix it all right.... Watch me.
IM FINALLY DONE NCKJDABVLKBSDV
Wow go me I fucked up the second drop xD
Continuing on what light said, USE YOUR BEST SONGS!!!!
I showed my songs in homeroom at the end of last year, and their starting to lean more into trap..... a bunch of freinds from different places (mainly from the west coast) (thats where i live) agree with me, and even flame me for my love of dnb, electro, and dubstep.
Hey bby..... other people like trap these days, so i got flamed for showing them a dnb song..... so dont make the same mistake i did..... try adding a more middle synth.... thers a lot of highs and lows in the intro, but no middle.....
I recommend you play your best songs.
Not too much though cuz then it will sound weird.
Oh try adding a little more reverb to the pluck arp.
needs improvement. add a bassline with a light wobble to it. Also use different synths for the intro chords. Sounds a little bland. Make it to where the chords fade into a lowpass to get that dramatic effect. I also recommend using a different pluck. Try using my knock pluck preset. You can alter that if you want. Give this a small dramatic intro too. I hope this helped!
@Luminoux The class begged whilst me and my friend were on fl studio in the back so we got volunTOLD to do show and tell of a new song on monday but we had to work by ourselves ;-;
Use pads maybe?
your school still does show n tell?
Im hoping ur show and tell teacher doesnt ask you for another track because of the pr3tty d0nk track