WIP PREVIEW 1

sky
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WIP 1 Critique this please

         
sky
Nov 27, 16

This is cancerous

sky
Nov 26, 16

lol

Wightfall
Nov 4, 16

more snare way more snare

3R3BU5(Collab comp)

This is an awesome song and all but I Have to agree with @Robo_Hero and @synthyyuuuuiuiuiu

Vulkron
Nov 3, 16

yeah it does feel a little too off. Songs can sound off and still sound insane, but urs was just a little too much. Its still sounds like candy tho

synthonix
Nov 3, 16

all i can say is it just feels off, maybe its just me

hvd
Nov 3, 16

check the snap grid man , only thing wrong is the beat pattern..thats really it

sky
Nov 3, 16

How could i fix tho?

synthonix
Nov 3, 16

ok then make the drums more enjoyable to listen to? it feels really stoppy-starty and doesnt go with the big smooth chords imho

sky
Nov 3, 16

Ok if sidechain hit the snare, this whole track would be ruined

hvd
Nov 3, 16

seems like you tried to give it a shuffle that it really didn't need , thats why its off. The kicks are fine , I can understand those , but the snare is pretty off.. its ok , its just the snare hits too late.

sky
Nov 3, 16

what i am looking for is constructive critique

synthonix
Nov 3, 16

bruh can you just read the desc of the track first?

sky
Nov 3, 16

How tf is it off wtf

synthonix
Nov 3, 16

idk man it doesnt have much flow if you get me

Limauru
Nov 3, 16

that snare is mia

sky
Nov 3, 16

Plus guys, this is a remix of renegade by lucs

sky
Nov 3, 16

how tf do they sound wierd?

synthonix
Nov 3, 16

epic chords but the drums are so confusing