Very nice track! I love the feel and everything. :)
One thing is the weird percussion at I don't think it sounds bad, but I think it would help if you slowed down the percussion a little bit. Also I think it would help if you turned the volume down the ambient thunder sounds and background noises. And also maybe eq some things.
Sorry, I'm not really good at crit, but I hope this helps. This is a very lovely track, and I like it a lot. :)
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changed cord sounds fixed percussion added reverb softend sounds fixed loudness
Very nice track! I love the feel and everything. :) One thing is the weird percussion at I don't think it sounds bad, but I think it would help if you slowed down the percussion a little bit. Also I think it would help if you turned the volume down the ambient thunder sounds and background noises. And also maybe eq some things. Sorry, I'm not really good at crit, but I hope this helps. This is a very lovely track, and I like it a lot. :)
lol why is this random dude listed as a coauthor
fixed the loudness and added an ending
lol this is terrable