I really like this (: could do with more development though,
Tonight, however, is different, because tonight, you can hear a commotion coming from the outside of your small desert abode. This has never happened to you before, and you find this fact to be mildly unsettling. Like I've said, you have lived in your small, quiet community for as long as you can remember, and not once have you ever had anything like this happen to you. You take a deep breath, and slowly right yourself into a sitting position to face your bedroom window...
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