I tried to go for something more atmosheric and Eerie. I don't think I did very well...
(What do you think 14etan?)
If you can guess what the vocal sample is without opeing assets or clicking the remix tab I'll!... do nothing because I have no way of verifying that you didn't do those things. :P
make it longer and more intricate as it develops
You may not know how to read but at least have the decency to erase the original desc.