I like the melody, but there's not much else that gives it any depth. Try adding chords or an arp, or a sub-melody, or all of them. But at the same time, it's your choice. (I don't listen to trap much, so I'm not sure if trap is supposed to sound a bit empty.)
all that said, for people you collab with in the future, remember; its a TEAM effort, and both/all sides should feel ready like it's done before it's published
it was short, im still not happy with the mix, and i feel like a lot more time and effort could've been put into it
just because im not responding does not mean you shouldn't ask me if i think we should upload it, because i would've absolutely said no, rn, i feel like the draft is much closer to completion after i've spentt my time mixing and working alot of the elements to make them sound decent
U think you can help me spread the word, i dont know many people on this website, so i cant really spread the word as much. If you dont want to, its fine, i dont mind
it could use some adjustments, especially with the lead synth. i'm not super educated in music theory but i think it's something to do with the keys not matching. typically what i do is i look for notes in the same key and make a basic countermelody.