The pad playing in the introduction should be wider in my opinion. By doing this I would place a tube to give it more of a grimy sound, a stereo detune to give it more texture and harmonized, and then an exciter to boost some of the frequencies and to make it more brighter.
Now for your bassline, there isn't really enough mid highs, and a lot of the lows playing. I think you could probably just give it distortion so it brings those frequencies into the sound more.
Aug 30, 22
it should be up at the moment
Aug 30, 22
if only audiotool wasnt down
Aug 30, 22
I don't really have anything else to say except to use reference tracks if you are ever stuck.
Aug 30, 22
The hi-hats could use some panning and eq'ing the lows out just in case.
Aug 30, 22
The kickdrum needs more punch, so I would try to boost the lowend more
Aug 30, 22
Make sure to also put an exciter on the bassline too to bring out those frequencies. Now for the whistlely lead, I actually like that a lot. But I think there should be another layer for it.
Aug 29, 22
This is nice.
The first snare seems a little quiet so you might want to boost that gain nob a bit
Overall great track!!
Aug 29, 22
Thank you!!
Aug 26, 22
Cool track.
it feels too sudden, the sound of ur pluck change too drastically, I don’t know if it’s the lfo or decay…
Other than that A cool typical synthwave rolling bass 1/16 could bring more intensity to it in my opinion. Pic is dope.
Anyway, good job
Aug 26, 22
thank you for the feedback, that pluck switch is because of the LFO, i was actually having a lot of trouble figuring it out because the chord pluck that comes in first i believe was a little bit off beat, hence why when the second pluck comes in it feels really sudden, the reason i didnt change it is because i honestly couldnt figure it out haha
Aug 25, 22
sounds good
republished
Aug 25, 22
got candle wax on my speaker
republished
Aug 25, 22
okay the structure and sound design is done i think
Aug 25, 22
I love the chord progression
Aug 25, 22
But do let me know when it is done. I am very looking forward to hearing it!
Aug 25, 22
No that's okay, I'd much rather you polish it since it has your creative spark.
Aug 25, 22
im going to today, i can invite you to the project too if you wanna make some changes!
Aug 25, 22
You should finish this tbh
Aug 25, 22
yooo thank you! took a little inspiration from 'Birthday song'
The pad playing in the introduction should be wider in my opinion. By doing this I would place a tube to give it more of a grimy sound, a stereo detune to give it more texture and harmonized, and then an exciter to boost some of the frequencies and to make it more brighter. Now for your bassline, there isn't really enough mid highs, and a lot of the lows playing. I think you could probably just give it distortion so it brings those frequencies into the sound more.
This is nice. The first snare seems a little quiet so you might want to boost that gain nob a bit Overall great track!!
Cool track. it feels too sudden, the sound of ur pluck change too drastically, I don’t know if it’s the lfo or decay… Other than that A cool typical synthwave rolling bass 1/16 could bring more intensity to it in my opinion. Pic is dope. Anyway, good job
sounds good
got candle wax on my speaker
okay the structure and sound design is done i think
I love the chord progression