New Album Coming Soon? [FEEDBACK]

althruist
64 Sep 17, 23 Other
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I need some feedback on this track on how I can improve it and such! This will also be part of a new album (ooo) AND your feedback will affect ALL of the songs in the album! Any kind of critics help, as long as it's constructive! :)

         
palestinium_ (alt)
palestinium_ (alt)
Nov 13, 23

wouldn't say more than waht chonoes said, although i think if you could just make the start a little more interesting, i think you have the first bar as that intro, make the second bar have that melody thing that comes in a little later (make that sound fade in in the second melody and push the rest a little closer. or at bar 3 the drums could come in (fading in) or both honestly why not

Khalid
Khalid
Oct 12, 23

nice, I can tell you did a lot with the heisenberg LFOS and other stuff, overall sounds good

Chonoes
Chonoes
Sep 17, 23

1/2 this is a beautiful song! and as you asked, here are some things i noticed: the sweep at i think should be a slightly lower frequency because it doesn't really fit that well there the cut on and off at should be slightly faster

althruist
althruist
Sep 17, 23

thank you for the awesome feedback redguy! <3 I'll definitely work on that when I get to remake the full version of this song and I will keep in mind the suggestions for future projects. Much appreciated and thanks for the kind compliment! ^^

Chonoes
Chonoes
Sep 17, 23

2/2 there's a really quiet synth that comes in at that i think should be slightly louder you should have another section of the song at that is even louder then the section before it that's all i can think of off the top of my head, it's a great song :)