I'd like to see the rest of this, you did have some pretty good stuff here. maybe add a progressive intro, buildup, one measure pause, then segue into the main portion (what you have here) the ending could just be a four measure volume raise, some weird effect, and then a full stop. all of this is up to you though.
very cool! some unexpected sounds here :)
very nice :D i would say its not neuro that much, but it reminds me of a song by pendulum ;)
I'd like to see the rest of this, you did have some pretty good stuff here. maybe add a progressive intro, buildup, one measure pause, then segue into the main portion (what you have here) the ending could just be a four measure volume raise, some weird effect, and then a full stop. all of this is up to you though.