@Crxyn (Cerixyn) beat this. BEAT THIS.

lol jk jk

this is definitely gonna be a full song, my best future bass track soooo far

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  • You guys should have done like the comp in the same draft, like make two separate songs using the same sounds

  • YOOO. its actually really good. But the mixing and mastering is not very good. the lead in the drop is veryyyy loud. i think the whole song is lacking some high end. i think the first little drop at 30 seconds in is a little bit abrupt. maybe filter in the drop saws there. or like a sweep up to it. just a little something there. also i dont love the tom fills in the break after that drop. maybe replace it with some impacts. also try to clean up the drop. its quite messy. try fixing theautomation

    • thanks so much @astrel ! I'll do my best to mix and master, and I can hear that those tom fills may be a bit off beat lmao xD

    • the build is the same as the drop. a bit messy. not bad tho. oh also the drop lead needs more high end. i like it though. just needs a bit of work

  • Oh shit, now this is WAY better than before. :D

  • you're improving really fast man ! i love the beginning ! the drop still needs some mastering, but this is intersting !

  • You have an intersting thing goign on where your like piano chords and saws LFO are playing at the same time, but idk if you mixed it like this, but it sounds like the song is like muffled. Also needs more low

  • Also if y'all are wondering about the pic of the track, the 5 sections in the song are (starting from the top, clockwise):

    Leads

    Bass

    Chords and Saws

    Intro synths (the piano and the pad)

    the drums and FX

  • Alrighty

    • lol i know, XD

    • :T...

      Look at the comment On my joke tutorial song

      I want to keep it friendly.

      I don't want a hate competition.

    • XD alright from this comment on we shall be rivals XD

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  • Those are fat saws... its a great song

    • Also, a chorus (if used correctly) can fatten saws

    • lol thats the exact way i processed the saws, High pass, no bass freq, stereo enhancer and exciter, merger to stereo detune channel and reverb, and heavy compression. took me 5 hours to complete XD

    • to make them thiccer. add some more saws. Preferably What i call A power saw xD Just a saw with alot more power. then add some detune... more detune. Turn High-Pass till Its little to no Bass in it. then add a exciter and mess around with that

      I swear im always unsure of myself when i give feedback. Even tho ik it's usefull

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  • this is really good man!!! your definetly moving in the right direction of music

  • Republished

    probs gonna be the final edit before i add vocals lmao

  • Republished

    tiny edits before i go to school XD

  • btw is this too loud for y'all? i thought the original was quite soft do I need to master this XD

  • Republished

    -Added some synth for fills here and there

    -Stacked the lead so that it doesn't get buried as much in the drop, increased the compression

    -Added some chord variety in the drop, mainly just dissinence

    -Changed the key cuz my voice couldn't reach the notes in the original XD