Working on bass patterns and stuff right now I just put in a bunch of weird stuff to fill in where things are going to be sooo yeah. Thank you for listening!
Well, the first thing this needs is some saturation. I recommend digital clipping and a multiband compressor. Also, if you want it to be a 'big' sound, i suggest adding a sub bass. Yeah, the drums kind of fill in those lower frequencies, but it's still missing the punch of the yoy. Also, you should use eq automatons to make it more vowely. Overall, it's not a bad start, but it's pretty generic, you should add your own personal touches to it to really make it your own. Nice job!