i don't have the experience to give you some tips or feedback (just 3 months experience lol)so,i will say that its so good,but you should work on it ! yeah,and i recommande to do what "SB28" said!! good luck in making music,bro!!
this could use a lot of work lmao, first thing i hear you could definitely take the lows out of that guitar and in terms of drums you def needa change the sound selection bc ion rly think these drums fit that well.