you made it really empty taking the choir and stuff out. minimalism is using the bare elements for something. when you take even more out you get this. here's what you could do:
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give it a sub. doesn't have to be a speaker knocker but this is mainly just mid frequency. it doesn't have any impact or weight to it.
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you made the synths really dry. give it at least a little reverb and/or delay to give it space and presence.
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Speaking of space, use the s-enhancer to give space.
