002 'The Closet'

RadicalEd
129 Dec 2, 22 Indie
0:00 / 2:20
8
Indie pop

*Lyrics* Last night I think an angel came to visit my room I was baptized By the mystical glow in it's eyes The red light We just came to a stop in the dead of night But it felt right My heart is racing to get out of sight We don't talk about it Yeah it's cool but we're just fools And we don't talk about it x3 And we don't prosecute The demons whisper in my ear But I paid my dues I feel the pain in my soul And my legs go numb I've been a slave for too long And my brain went dumb I can't get over you You look so pretty in the light I've been hypnotized And it feels so right

         
Feb 18, 23

Boppin'!

Feb 18, 23

i'm always tempted to remake this lol it could sound waay better

Dec 4, 22

Okay this is really nice However when the hats come in, the contrast between the brightness of the drums compared to everything else becomes quite noticeable especially since the vocals aren't very dynamic (no fault of yours, we work with what we've got) Apart from that, maybe the beat gets a bit repetitive in that middle section, maybe a pad could fill in some sound but thats it really

Dec 4, 22

noted. thanks for the feedback!

Dec 2, 22

WORD ♠️ :)

Dec 2, 22

l.o.l

Dec 2, 22

doesn't say but this is a remix of 'Tender Chance' by @marioflores, so shout out to him for creating a simple yet awesome beat. i had lots of fun with it lol