every now and then
i try to write
pick up the pen
yet the lyrics are never right
i try to explain the feelings
yet they always overwhelm me
i try to tell her the story
but im frozen with fright
she didn't judge, not one bit
as i stood cold, frozen and hit
headlights blinding, leaving me where i stand
without a trace of goodbye, so i raise my hand
i embrace the dark, knowing its fair
yet also knowing i wont see her there
i know she's too good, for my soul at least
but at least she'll be happy, thats all i want to see
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if you want to know the meaning behind this one, just ask
enoy it while it lasts, i suppose
that intro was long.
I thought I was listening to an prelude for a moment.
It seems as though overall, you have a great sound choice but layering from what I've listened, seems to be where you struggle sometimes.
Oct 27, 22
yeah i need to add some b a s s
Oct 27, 22
my only crit is add layers to the melody and some bass lol
crusher is less idk wbat it sounds like though
Nice one.
that intro was long. I thought I was listening to an prelude for a moment. It seems as though overall, you have a great sound choice but layering from what I've listened, seems to be where you struggle sometimes.
my only crit is add layers to the melody and some bass lol
the kick is weird ill fix soon