An Unfinished Puzzle

An Unfinished Puzzle

Citryx
119 Nov 19, 2014 Other
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Citryx

Life isn't the same without you.Mardi Gras is not the same. Christmas is not the same. Easter, too. I am not the same. Grandpa is not the same. The house isn't the same. Nothing is. I keep your picture in my wallet, and it's just about the only thing that gets me through the day. I drive your car, but it feels empty without your direction. I write music in hopes that you will hear it in your celestial home. I hope you are proud. But I feel that what I do, now is not enough because there is so much that I didn't do. There's so much I wish I would've said. There's so much I wish I could've done. Wish I could hear that you're proud of me, or even get to see your smile. I wish your hand wasn't clenched, so that I could hold you lifeless hand, in hopes that maybe you'd come back. I wish I could say everything on my mind. But, alas, I cannot. All I have to maybe get to you is a melody. A melody and a prayer. You may be gone, but my love still stands strong. I love you, Nana.

blizzy.
blizzy. Dec 18, 2014

One more thing,,, XD. Fix that snare. Find a more sharp punchy one.

blizzy.
blizzy. Dec 18, 2014

also EQing out bass in your pads and snare can clean up your mix tremendously.

blizzy.
blizzy. Dec 18, 2014

Honestly your mixes need more head room. I find I would enjoy your tracks more if they had better mixing. When ever a new sound comes in it doesn't have its place in the mix it sits on top of the other sounds. Using more panning and volume change could really help these problems. Also in Drum and Bass it is hard to sidechain. You dont want the drums killing the mix and you dont want them to be too quiet, but in this track sidechain a bit more. Make the drums hit harder!

DamnLullaby
DamnLullaby Nov 22, 2014

The great piano from start,and melody as good,great track clearly!It is hard work to play piano with machinist !!!!!

DarkDescendant
DarkDescendant Nov 21, 2014

Just one listen earn you the life you so desperately need :P Listen today and chart this baby!

KroniX
KroniX Nov 21, 2014

mistmuseic@gmail.com

KroniX
KroniX Nov 21, 2014

Lets help @QuiLL get this to the top charts today guys.

KroniX
KroniX Nov 21, 2014

Very nice dude gave me the chills when the piano came in. Wish you the best, its not easy letting go, but we have to at one point in time. Very sorry for the loss, I will be here if you need anything.

DarkDescendant
DarkDescendant Nov 21, 2014

This track is just gorgeous though! Please feature!

DarkDescendant
DarkDescendant Nov 21, 2014

Amazing! So sorry for your lose mate :'(

Belody
Belody Nov 19, 2014

oh my god the piano in all your tracks impresses me so much every time

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