This song has words, unfortunately I will not write them all down. But listen carefully and you will hear your own words.

I wish I wont feel the pain

And, I wish the pain, would, go away

And I wish that nobody would know this pain

And I wish I would not go insain

Wake me up from this horrid dream

Hey everybody whats your name

Being sick everyday makes me want to scream

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  • is the poem going to be rapped or sung?

  • the picture is great=) and i the kind of a conversation that the drums do with the melody

  • nice melody

  • man i love the acoustic beats you have...great trak here

  • Thanks Asclepeion, your right it could use some effects to spice it up some. Thanks to everyone who listened and faved, Its you guys that make it all worth while.

  • the only way i could add does words on this i suspect i need a deep voice in cave some water drop add maybe a wind ...inspiring works you have there i know now why danielgruba did a remix of your works :)

  • Really awesome track. No contributors either.

  • Original stuff!

  • i love how you take the time with each track to really find a sound that you are happy with we all know how much time it takes to find a sound that we are all happy with when making something original!!! :) btf

  • good stuff

  • BTF!! great sound

  • hehe :)

  • thank you fellas, and thanks for the idea ABADDON, sounds great.

  • and i wisch the lost patient back from the gates of hell

  • BTF this is a great track :)