a while ago
you have joined the stars
leaving me full of tears
far enough to overflow
letting me empty of dreams
a void bottle lost in the streams
a walnut hull buffeted by the swell
too late to ring the bell
i was a wreck sinking into the underworld
longing to flee to the upper one
masthead struck day after day
by a wave by a wave
a lonely castaway
digging its own grave
a robinson crusoe
without his friday
heart as the sails
shredded
life as the keel
shattered
after the thunderbolt
flowing wet salt
swirling tornado of questions and regrets
as sole answer the wind
so i write
day night
engraving dark thoughts in the white wood
until it burns or decays
until they fly away
to heal the wound
finally, the calm
"Digging its own grave" should initially have been "digging his own grave". But this is "its" that came out naturally both when writing and recording. In the end, I find it better that way because it exacerbates the feeling and the will of disembodiment
Oct 20, 21
Tranquil.
You have genuinely become one of my favorite artists both on this platform and in music in general, everything you put out is not only has an amazingly consistent quality but a spirit and character. I've said this before but I'll say it again; amazing work.
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PS
I never thought an 808 could sound so peaceful
Oct 20, 21
Thank you so much bro, it means the world to me... I try to speak with my heart, I am glad if it reaches out to you.
Actually, the main HiHat sound comes from the Tb303 with loads of sound design ;)
Oct 20, 21
You should really do more vocal recordings too
Oct 20, 21
I don't like my language watered down, I don't like my edges rounded off.
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Great work... although I can't really listen to this entirely since it has some of those freq's that just get me depressed.
Oct 20, 21
Ah okay, I see! Yeah a lot of sadness, because it stems out of personal events. I have other lyrics ideas in mind that would sound way more positive, but not in my top priority of projects at the moment
Oct 20, 21
You misunderstood. This triggers a sadness in me. There is nothing wrong with the mix!
Oct 20, 21
Thank you bro. Yeah, I surely have a long way to go to improve in that kind of stuff
Oct 20, 21
I see two forms of art here
Oct 20, 21
Ow thank you :]
Oct 19, 21
I love the way you manage to combine poetry with ambient style. literature, poetry and music and technique. excellent.
Oct 19, 21
Thank you mate <3
Oct 19, 21
Thank you so much... You are an inspiration to me through your vocals, and actually encouraged me to take a huge risk with this track, so this means a lot to me <3
Oct 17, 21
lots of artsy vibes from this one! the french accent elevates it lol, really cool
Oct 17, 21
thank you buddy :)
Oct 17, 21
Amazing Amazing Epic!! :~) great work I love it, nice poem, just well done
Oct 17, 21
Thanks a lot mate <3
Oct 15, 21
sea foam voice reveal real
but jokes aside this gives me such an ethereal vibe and your voice just fits so well with the sounds you've combined here holy jesus
aw this is lovely, love your vox
"Digging its own grave" should initially have been "digging his own grave". But this is "its" that came out naturally both when writing and recording. In the end, I find it better that way because it exacerbates the feeling and the will of disembodiment
Tranquil. You have genuinely become one of my favorite artists both on this platform and in music in general, everything you put out is not only has an amazingly consistent quality but a spirit and character. I've said this before but I'll say it again; amazing work. - PS I never thought an 808 could sound so peaceful
I don't like my language watered down, I don't like my edges rounded off. _____ Great work... although I can't really listen to this entirely since it has some of those freq's that just get me depressed.
I see two forms of art here
I love the way you manage to combine poetry with ambient style. literature, poetry and music and technique. excellent.
lots of artsy vibes from this one! the french accent elevates it lol, really cool
Amazing Amazing Epic!! :~) great work I love it, nice poem, just well done
sea foam voice reveal real but jokes aside this gives me such an ethereal vibe and your voice just fits so well with the sounds you've combined here holy jesus