Temptation

Ben Erb
472 Aug 28, 2025 Hip Hop
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Ben Erb
Mr. Outside
Mr. Outside Oct 9, 2025

This is nice! I really like the bell, it sounds like a music box

Kengy9II
Kengy9II Aug 31, 2025

I'd say it sounds pretty good! Quite spooky ngl

Jam!e
Jam!e Aug 28, 2025

bass is lacking a lot of bass frequency, song is lacking a lot of atmosphere, but the drums are fucking awesome and i love the bells and synths! :D

yito ☮
yito ☮ Aug 28, 2025

I'm not quite sure whether it's just my headphones right now, but it sounds like the bass comes predominantly from the left channel which is a bit odd. I always center my bass or do mid/side on a reese, that's both on the right and the left due to detune. It's only a thing until like .

Ben Erb
Ben Erb Aug 28, 2025

I'll see what I can do.

Dudios
Dudios Aug 28, 2025

@yito ☮ I hear it too. It's not just your headphones

yito ☮
yito ☮ Aug 28, 2025

With all that aside, I like how you filled out the space around the sample. Things are in tune and make sense, which isn't always easy with samples. I can't really say much in terms of mixing, but everything sounds fairly clean. It's a good listen.

yito ☮
yito ☮ Aug 28, 2025

The part at threw me off. It's a very harsh sound, I'd recommend turning down the volume on that particular moment.

DJ TeK-NjA
DJ TeK-NjA Aug 28, 2025

Bass needs to be Mono, if it isn't already....

CNMNE
CNMNE Aug 28, 2025

Whoa this is cool! I would suggest maybe taking the main lead down by one octave, and the start bit feels maybe a bit empty and could use some mixing. I would up the low end on the kick a bit, and maybe add some reverb

Diceros
Diceros Aug 28, 2025

I like it👍