Critisim and tips are very appreciated because I do want to be a producer one day <3
Thank you Phyre For helping me With the bass and some simple edits <3
Pixl
i have nothing to add that others haven't already said. just wanted to say that this sounds surprisingly clean, as in this sounded pretty good on the ears for what there was. well done!
Feb 16
Thank you!
Feb 13
As of right now im done :>
republished
Feb 12
Added lowpass, reworked drums a little, Fixed plain bass
Feb 13
Yea naswalt is a G fr
Feb 12
Low-key better than it probs was going to be if I never asked about tips W naswalt
Feb 12
I think what's most needed is composition.
The intro feels disconnected and the song might be better served by starting with the main melody at without the bass (maybe slowly open up a high pass filter and bring the bass in when the filter is gone)
I'd also consider some more rhythm in the bass and hats on the drums to give it more energy and development. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=L2lK5AOoFLg see how this example starts off very simple and adds something every 4 bars.
Feb 12
I don't Plan on it >:)
Im far to bull headed to just let it win
Thanks for the support <3
Feb 12
NGL music is hard don't give up
Feb 12
Though i feel like I lowkey cooked
Feb 12
NP
Feb 12
I don't know jack Shit about any of this, so I'm using it as a learning experience.
I appreciate the help though [nxz].wav
Feb 12
Tbh i would have fixed that although i dont have enough time with school atm
Feb 12
Hey Naswalt, I just wanted to say thank you for taking the time to really listen and give feedback! I really appreciate you pointing out the composition and the structure ideas, which help me way more than just “it’s good” or “it’s bad.” It means a lot that you broke it down and even gave an example. I’m definitely going to experiment with those changes.
republished
Feb 11
Complete
Feb 11
I mean so do I, that's my goal though. I love music and I want it to be my whole life Lowey,
Feb 11
I'm serious, I just want to make music for fun.
Feb 11
Right
Feb 11
Thats a good goal to have, although it's not mine.
Hold on this charted?!
i have nothing to add that others haven't already said. just wanted to say that this sounds surprisingly clean, as in this sounded pretty good on the ears for what there was. well done!
As of right now im done :>
Added lowpass, reworked drums a little, Fixed plain bass
I think what's most needed is composition. The intro feels disconnected and the song might be better served by starting with the main melody at without the bass (maybe slowly open up a high pass filter and bring the bass in when the filter is gone) I'd also consider some more rhythm in the bass and hats on the drums to give it more energy and development. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=L2lK5AOoFLg see how this example starts off very simple and adds something every 4 bars.
Complete