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owtlet
1,433 Mar 31, 19 Hip Hop
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Leinholz
May 9, 19

Love the melodies in this! I think the beat (especially kick and snare) hit a little hard wich spoils the lovely soft textures and soundscape imho. I think it's because the synths are pretty mellow and the drums all have quite a lot of high end. Maybe you could try dulling them down a bit with some low pass.

jordans3720
Apr 24, 19

Can I....Can I make a song to this? (exclusive rights)

Vulkron
Apr 6, 19

lofi-ish, i rlly like it my g :D :D

owtlet
Apr 4, 19

thank you guys!

naut
Apr 1, 19

very nice <3

MOOSEY ♪
Mar 31, 19

wow..just wow..speechless

owtlet
Mar 31, 19

thank you!

owtlet
Mar 31, 19

the 'drop' comes in suddenly because it is started on the second eighth note of the measure. This is intentional

ofvmusic   ‏‏‎‎

I think that the 2nd and 3rd note of the bassline are off key, maybe is just my perception, and yes, like Celcius says, at the pad comes suddenly, it will sounds better maybe with a volume automation. Annnd the drums sounds a little repetitive. But I like it <3, keep doing this stuff.

owtlet
Mar 31, 19

there is a phaser, which gives the sub a unique sound

owtlet
Mar 31, 19

I intended the drop to be sudden. Thank you for listening and the crit!

owtlet
Mar 31, 19

they are not offkey

Celcius (older account)

The pad at seems to come on a bit suddenly, perhaps it could use a swell or fade in for a smoother transition. Drums sound nice and crisp, but a bit repetitive. Liking the slow progression. Bass sounds a bit airy without a sub underneath it, but it depends on taste.

owtlet
Mar 31, 19

very true about the drums

owtlet
Mar 31, 19

crit welcome :)