This doesn't sound too bad to me, I could actually imagine the first part being in the background of a scene filled with suspense. Maybe later on in the track, though, you could add other subtle sounds and noises to it to make this sound better. I feel like this has potential!
Mar 23, 19
Then again, I'm just a beginner, so maybe don't take too much advice from me. I'm just stating what I think :)
This doesn't sound too bad to me, I could actually imagine the first part being in the background of a scene filled with suspense. Maybe later on in the track, though, you could add other subtle sounds and noises to it to make this sound better. I feel like this has potential!