Debut track (sneak peak) Draft #1 by S//A

This is a sneak peek at my debut track this is the first few minutes of the song since this is the first draft it isn't that good. After listening please please please can you give me your opinions on how I should make it better it would be much appreciated thank you :) Add as much criticsm as possible please lol i really need it so I can improve thanks

ordinateur

Apr 22, 14

perfecto

S//A

Nov 4, 13

thanks guys im gunna finish this off

Suith

Oct 27, 13

Awesome work!

CarlosFA

Oct 15, 13

I have to say make it a little more diverse with more sounds and less repetiteveness.

justkingdion

Oct 7, 13

I finally got around to listening to this, excellent work! Especially for a track with this much put in it already, it's really solid. Not only that, songs like this are really praised in the community. You definitely know what you're doing, keep up the good work.

Sonat

Oct 2, 13

that percussion intro! AHH

S//A

Oct 2, 13

ntjon

Oct 1, 13

Welcome! Go ahead! Try and work with your mind alert and your ears open...

ntjon

Oct 1, 13

Welcome! Go ahead! Try and work with your mind alert and your ears open...

MaxtrKraft

Oct 1, 13

good job

S//A

Sep 27, 13

thanku

S//A

Sep 24, 13

TheUndertaker thanks for the tips im going to do that

Drakulaxter

Sep 24, 13

awsome!!

TheUndertaker

Sep 24, 13

It's not bad. Maybe too long. In electonic music, 4min is enough in my opinion. Also, you should watch some tutorials, you can find anything you're looking for on audiotool, or youtube. I think the most important is to learn how to use a compressor. It makes a big difference, this little tool is wonderful. And look how people you like make their songs by clicking on "remix". I learnt so much things in a very short time this way.