Last Saturday (Draft)

Ben Erb
174 Sep 14, 24 Lo-Fi
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my first vocal song since surgery. its gonna probably be good.

         
Zir0h
Sep 17, 24

Please post lyrics to songs when you do vocals or sing, especially when the vocal is pretty much the backbone of the song. I believe I've mentioned this in prior critiques. I don't think there are many major artists out there who don't have lyrics posted for a song. It's just kind of a given imo and I think it would be really helpful to your audience. Help us out a little, eh? Keep up the hard work.

Ben Erb
Sep 17, 24

thanks, ill make sure to do it.

Zir0h
Sep 17, 24

Uh, I'd prefer not to use a term like that. Just trying to be helpful, there's no reason to put yourself down. Be kind to yourself, even if it does seem like it should be an obvious thing. You asked for crit, so I gave it. Don't beat yourself up over it. Just work on doing your best every time!

Ben Erb
Sep 17, 24

okay, I for get most of the time because I'm atarded.

Zir0h
Sep 17, 24

@rufis101 I think this sounds much better. wdyt?

Zir0h
Sep 17, 24

I think I'm starting to get the hang of your sarcasm lol

the last knight
Sep 14, 24

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Kengy9II
Sep 14, 24

New vocal song lets freaking goooooooooooooooo

Kengy9II
Sep 14, 24

It's probably better than my planned vocal songs Plus, you put effort and time into this, and it sounds pretty good too Like a good intermission song

Ben Erb
Sep 14, 24

its not very good, lol

Ben Erb
Sep 14, 24

first song that is Semi country.