Dilemma

Chasm
436 Nov 25, 12 Other
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I don't know what to do beyond 5 seconds in, most of the time

         
Chasm
Dec 23, 12

Thanks for the feedback! I changed it a bit a while back, and then forgot about it and made another few drafts since then. Just now I've put in your suggestions. I should probably work on one thing at a time now, so I can actually push stuff out of the drafts.

Sota.
Dec 23, 12

i Like it, Id love to see you build more off this, maybe add a little delay to the bells, and a slight amount of lfo to the bass for a vibrato effect, to keep it interesting; and you could have a great start to a melow or melodic dubstep track :)

Chasm
Nov 25, 12

thanks, any suggestions for later on?