Dystopia

ITokyo
554 Oct 20, 12 Other
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[offbeatninja]
Oct 24, 12

I like the groove , but you might wanna elberate on the beat a little.

ITokyo
Oct 21, 12

that's true I thought the same thing when I completed and felt that something was missing , I originally had a complete different sound but changed it and figured I could redo later after somebody gave me some pointers. Thank you for your feedback ,i'm definitely going to take this into consideration.