Finish or no?(Improvements)2

Savage_cain_haynes™✪LO$T®
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Apr 24, 17

guys bout time i finished this today

Mar 22, 17

dude this should be some sort of chill track with some reverb and a softer piano

Mar 11, 17

The snap is really off beat, man. Apart from that, my advice is to try to add a lower tone or a bass, to embody the main melody, it really makes a difference!

Mar 10, 17

np

Mar 10, 17

i like thiss

Mar 10, 17

thanks man

Mar 10, 17

idk

Mar 10, 17

TBH, i dont know if you notice, but there is a lot of work to be done on this. I dont know much about AT just to let you know, but music is a different subject. Like light said, add some piano loops. Fix up your structuring and smooth everything out so that it fits. Overall though your doing well. Just focus on those key subjects. ~A P E X

Mar 10, 17

thanks man imma change the snap so it's more like flowing into the beat and not off beat

Mar 10, 17

I don't think this is even close to being finished. It needs a lot of work on the structuring. Maybe try a new different piano loop. I like the second part, but the first half needs to be fixed.

Mar 10, 17

im still makin improvements but i hope you like it when it comes out

Mar 10, 17

not finished yet

Mar 10, 17

no it's still being worked on man

Mar 10, 17

That's all I have to say.

Mar 10, 17

no

Mar 10, 17

what?

Mar 9, 17

oh well imma finish

Mar 9, 17

you wanna collab ?

Mar 9, 17

hell yea

Mar 9, 17

aight waitin to see what every one else says