In my opinion, the problem with your original was that you created a cool baseline and then added more instruments that play exactly the same notes. This makes it sound too monotonous overall.
I always try to create a counter melody that doesn't echo the main melody or baseline, but plays different notes that fit harmoniously.
You can vary the drums to add more variety, and effects always help.
Cool remix !
Hey now that's cool stuff there. Good track to remix. I still also love ER-445's original track. Straight jammin out.
Fantastic!!! Putting this in a house set for sure π€
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WOW,this is a big change!!!