I agree with psychedelic and 808 leelo about the drums, this could definitely use a snare and hihats. also I think you should turn that riser down a little, and the main melodies at , , and should have a more variation and are also loud and overpower the low end of the drums
More drums and little changes in notes
Now more variations
I agree with psychedelic and 808 leelo about the drums, this could definitely use a snare and hihats. also I think you should turn that riser down a little, and the main melodies at , , and should have a more variation and are also loud and overpower the low end of the drums
i agree with everyone and also add more effects
put more drums in it
Bit raw but some good approaches. Keep it going