This might hurt, but I am going to rough up your baby. It is kind of slow for six minutes. Frankly I got bored and wanted to do something else after four minutes. It needs some thing to drive it forward. Like a bass or a drum. And also it could use something to bind it together more, it is a little disjunct. You do have something pretty nice here though. Just polish it up a little bit.
This might hurt, but I am going to rough up your baby. It is kind of slow for six minutes. Frankly I got bored and wanted to do something else after four minutes. It needs some thing to drive it forward. Like a bass or a drum. And also it could use something to bind it together more, it is a little disjunct. You do have something pretty nice here though. Just polish it up a little bit.
GoldKnight Great Track, I Love! n_n