not bad, sound like a pretty average track in my music classes. all i can say is that its really repetitive, need more creative ideas in it and plus the drums are a bit too quiet, plus at the lead (maybe?) or the plucky thing is out of key and doesnt sound good at all, other than that it's a solid first track, but you should probably remove that 2 minute silence at the end
sounds good
not bad, sound like a pretty average track in my music classes. all i can say is that its really repetitive, need more creative ideas in it and plus the drums are a bit too quiet, plus at the lead (maybe?) or the plucky thing is out of key and doesnt sound good at all, other than that it's a solid first track, but you should probably remove that 2 minute silence at the end