Hiroshinazakima

TrackSharks
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Coming back to some synth play. Made an evening, after watching a documentary about the 2 atomic bombs launched in Japan during WW2. A very personnal work, that will not be much appreciated i guess, but i had to make this one. If some of you feel like giving some feedback/criticism, you are welcome, tks .

         
TrackSharks
Mar 4, 15

well, tks a lot Agrippa, that's what i call a feedback!. Regarding the image, i have choosen it randomly, juts one showing the destructive power of such a weapon....

Agrippa
Mar 3, 15

I'm a bit of a connoisseur of nuclear detonations. The image is wrong - that's Castle Bravo. Hydrogen Bomb. 15 megatons. The United States largest ever detonation. 1954 Bikini Atoll. Well worth a watch. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fd1IFjBNNVo

Agrippa
Mar 3, 15

Don't know what the earliest version was like, but I don't think anything needs to change now. It's got a feeling of innocence being consumed by a kind of driving horror and violence. Subtle Japanese feeling to it as well.

[pe]
Mar 2, 15

argh it kicks right in my brain

slopo
Mar 2, 15

Fucking awesome !

TrackSharks
Mar 2, 15

aha, tks E-trim. Even if i didn't touch the snare so much? ;)

E-trim
Mar 2, 15

This is way better m8. rate 9.9/10 now. u told me perfection doesnt exist :)

TrackSharks
Mar 2, 15

ahah, merci Smily :). j'ai TOUJOURS été du côté obscur, ca se voit peut être un peu plus en ce moment ;).

Smily
Mar 2, 15

dans la serie esprit torturé, Shark bascule du coté obscur :D cool track

TrackSharks
Mar 2, 15

thank both of you :). Leinholz: yes, i will definitly tweak it a bit more (as for each track some would say...). The Seahorse: yes, wen to sleep very very late... So do i win the dumb contest? ;)

The Seahorse
Mar 2, 15

Looks like you didn't go to sleep, haha! :) Cool track, man, my favorite synth is sorta buried though. Great subject for a song. Incredibly interesting time in history.

Leinholz
Mar 2, 15

Cool build. Really enjoy this. Maybe you could try to get some of all of that detail to shine a bit more and stand out but don't think this sounds empty at all.

TrackSharks
republished
Mar 2, 15

some edits and mastering

TrackSharks
Mar 2, 15

tks a lot for feedback @corey1212 . Agree with you, feels a bit empty, but the frequency spectrum is already full and changing anything starts being hard. oh, there's no tonematrix btw :)