Edits
This is something I actually wanna finish, unlike some of my other shit (including the ones that apparently charted lmao)
Please:
-crit
-crit harshly
-dont remake (i know what your thinking astron, im gonna pick on you specifically XDD)
anyyways, i really like this, good luck finishing it!
May 3, 17
Thank ya for critting supe harshlyy :D
May 2, 17
also sounds like this was inspired by martin so if you wanted a title you could use something computer related because martin likes to call his tracks stuff like virus, error 404, proxy, keygeb ect. maybe syntax lol idk
May 2, 17
also you could maybe change the last chord the second time the chord progression loops so its the same chord but maybe in a different position. (eg if it was c, e and g, you could change the chord notes to be e, g and c on the top). the chord change idea might not work and its not really necessary, but it could add variation which would make it sound more interesting.
May 2, 17
make the chords a bit louder and the white noise a bit quieter, because the chords sound really nice but they're kinda being drowned out by the white noise.
May 1, 17
Too much high end. You could add some really nice riser if you do that. Could be slightly more progressive.
May 1, 17
Here's my crit: Try making the second to last note in the loop higher.
May 1, 17
Actually, if what's shown here is 2 loops, do every other loop having the change.
Never Go Down!! I think thats a good name
anyyways, i really like this, good luck finishing it!
also sounds like this was inspired by martin so if you wanted a title you could use something computer related because martin likes to call his tracks stuff like virus, error 404, proxy, keygeb ect. maybe syntax lol idk
also you could maybe change the last chord the second time the chord progression loops so its the same chord but maybe in a different position. (eg if it was c, e and g, you could change the chord notes to be e, g and c on the top). the chord change idea might not work and its not really necessary, but it could add variation which would make it sound more interesting.
make the chords a bit louder and the white noise a bit quieter, because the chords sound really nice but they're kinda being drowned out by the white noise.
Too much high end. You could add some really nice riser if you do that. Could be slightly more progressive.
Here's my crit: Try making the second to last note in the loop higher.
Ultra Apple!
Title: Genesis
Title Idea: Ideosyncratic
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