Great job though, you should be proud of yourself :D
Aug 10, 13
Okay I've listened to it and here's my feedback for you :D
-Good chords
-Interesting melody and layout
-Quality = great!
Now for a little bit of constructive criticizm :O (bad part)
The synths are waaayy too raw. Try playing with more effects and oscillators.
The saws in particular. It's interesting but slightly plain and/or harsh.
In one sentence, play with the tools you have to make something more engaging.
-ALSO- doesn't work properly after the sample. Play around with that too :)
Great job though, you should be proud of yourself :D
Okay I've listened to it and here's my feedback for you :D -Good chords -Interesting melody and layout -Quality = great! Now for a little bit of constructive criticizm :O (bad part) The synths are waaayy too raw. Try playing with more effects and oscillators. The saws in particular. It's interesting but slightly plain and/or harsh. In one sentence, play with the tools you have to make something more engaging. -ALSO- doesn't work properly after the sample. Play around with that too :)
Listening now...