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For those who love in secret.
It was love at first look, will of the angels hook
And suddenly you feel like you’re an empty book
Waiting to be filled with a story from the skies
You’re already dreaming of a new shiny start
When she illuminates your little wounded heart
But deep inside you it’s clear, your heart never lies
She doesn’t see the bright spark in your opened eyes
She doesn’t feel the pulse resonating in your heart
You’re too shy, beeing invisible is your art
And deep in your head, your hope fade away and dies
You’re stuck into the glowing light of her shadow
Trying to catch the sun through the broken window
You start your endless fall in the rising darkness
And now she’s gone and you feel completely hopeless
Time passes and she still ignoring your feelings
You finally find enough courage to tell her
You already know the answer, but you’re waiting
And now it’s done, your heart is colder than ever
But you’ve never gave up, the fight is not finished
Love is immortal and you're still invisible
You would wish to have the strength to tell her all but
Love is immortal and you're still invisible
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About this track : It sucks but I didn't publish anything for months so...
About the little text : I tried to write what I couldn't put in the music (due to its suckness (but even this I couldn't...)). Please don't mind all the english mistakes :)
I'm searching for a vocalist for this track (maybe the lyrics could be above but it's quite bad... really bad) so if you can help me don't hesitate^^
Oh and there is a little click at 0.00 and I couldn't remove it... any suggestions?
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merci :)))
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tres chouette
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Wow bravo ! et elle sucks pas ;)
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merci beaucoup^^ ba en fait je sais pas plus je l'écoutais plus je la trouvais chiante :)
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Wow vraiment super et je vois pas pourquoi tu dis "it sucks" alors que franchement c'est du très bon boulot ! Et bravo pour les paroles, y'a vraiment du style !
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thanks a lot torn :)
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love it !!
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excellent :)
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merci grotzo! haha je suis assez content de celle la^^
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Bon boulot, et coup de cœur pour le son de la basse. Pour l'ajout de la voix, à mon avis un "talk over" serait l'idéal (ça limite la recherche d'un vrai chanteur !). J'aime ce texte aussi et certaines phrases du genre : " The glowing light of her shadow"....
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thanks man :)
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aaagh i love this
