1. Moral lesson

"She gave you hope, and took it from you.

When you were already broken, she broke you even more."

Icebox, ?????

"it's hard to be an angeel in the middle of hell, but hey, ANYTHING IS POSSIBLE" Poke-p, oct 21, 2021

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  • Republished

    Almost all the things that Ixebox recomended... :-(

  • hmmm

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  • Well... maybe you could, uh, help me a... little bit?

  • wut

  • cant rlly say i like it cuz:

    1. the 808 is out of tune from the entire track

    2. the attempt at vocal chopping is interesting but at around 02:08 it gets vv bad as it goes haywire from the rhythm, the pad goes off tune, and the reese also goes off tune (clashes with the 808)

    3. all that was rlly added in this remix was just an 808 and a simple clap, kick and hihat, but ig with better structuring and more creativity u could improve this

  • TOOK SOOOOOOOOOO F-ING LONGGGGGGGG

  • Republished

    Fixed weird bug with the beat on the 2nd verse