Lyrics:
Thinkin bout the days when it wasnt right,
Dark roads ahead searching for the light.
Lost a couple friends to the life they chose,
Only thing i got left are the highs and lows.
Pain in my heart, i just hold it in,
Tryna keep my cool through the thick and thin.
Mama always prayed id stay on my grind,
Told me life gets hard, just give it time.
Slow down, yeah, im breathing deep,
Carryin weight but i still dont sleep.
Praying for peace but i got these scars,
Fightin for a dream that feels very far.
Seen the streets take the innocent too,
Kids grow up fast, thats only the truth
Pain dont heal, but we learn to cope,
Found a little strength when i lost some hope.
Life been rought but i keep my head,
Countin blessing when i go to bed.
Dreams got big, now im chasin more,
But i still remember who i do it for.
Slow down, yeah, im breathin deep,
Carryin weight but i still dont sleep.
Prayin for peace but i got these scars,
Fightin for a dream that feels so far.
One step closer every single day,
Working on myself, tryna find my way.
Hustle through the night till the sky turns blue,
Did it for my people, yeah, i stayed true
SOMEWHERE IN THE NIGHT LOVES GONNA FIND YOU (it's an insider joke you wouldn't get it)
Nov 17, 24
How did this only chart in the singles but not in trap
Nov 21, 24
Well now we good
Nov 17, 24
True
Nov 17, 24
well i mean atleast it charted somewhere
Nov 17, 24
oh nvm i see it lmao, i was wondering where the views were coming from XD
Nov 17, 24
In the singles chart
Nov 17, 24
Huh where did it chart?
Nov 13, 24
actually good vocals niceeeee dude!
Nov 14, 24
Thank you
Nov 12, 24
bring the piano up a little bit
i would also say that you should put a bit more stereo on the vocals so they're not occupying the same space as the kick (so they don't drown each other out)
i don't really know anything about this genre so
Nov 12, 24
Appreciate it, it was supposed to be a polo g vibe
Nov 12, 24
otherwise this is great
Nov 12, 24
Great
Nov 12, 24
i see you did this in bandlab, correct? if so, lower the Classic to about 22%, and it will be better, and same with what hurakan said, let em ring. other than that, its not bad for a vocal song. when i make mine, i usually take 4 or 5 tries, idk how many passes you took, but its actually not bad. i like the mood a lot, i like this style of music and i would love to work with you in the future dude.
Sincerely, Ben Erb
Nov 12, 24
This was one take only
Nov 12, 24
Thank you man
Nov 12, 24
I hope you make more of this stuff. you might even make my charts.
Nov 12, 24
nice
Nov 12, 24
vocals way too filtered
let them ring out in the mix, not sit back idly
SOMEWHERE IN THE NIGHT LOVES GONNA FIND YOU (it's an insider joke you wouldn't get it)
How did this only chart in the singles but not in trap
actually good vocals niceeeee dude!
bring the piano up a little bit i would also say that you should put a bit more stereo on the vocals so they're not occupying the same space as the kick (so they don't drown each other out) i don't really know anything about this genre so
Great
i see you did this in bandlab, correct? if so, lower the Classic to about 22%, and it will be better, and same with what hurakan said, let em ring. other than that, its not bad for a vocal song. when i make mine, i usually take 4 or 5 tries, idk how many passes you took, but its actually not bad. i like the mood a lot, i like this style of music and i would love to work with you in the future dude. Sincerely, Ben Erb
nice
vocals way too filtered let them ring out in the mix, not sit back idly