definitely better
however.. there's a problem. your pad chords: they're too raw and basic, it makes it souns really cheesy. you have the 1, 3, 5 major notes on the chords and imo it just doesnt sound good. fortunately this is super easy to fix: experiment with different notes.
anyway, you're probably sick of working on this track so just leave it as it is; it sounds good. but just remember to experiment.
everyone knows what a basic major-chord pad sounds like. Make something no one's heard before if you want a "wow" factor.
instead of 1, 3, 5, try 1, 2, 5. add in some sixths, sevenths and ninths.
definitely better however.. there's a problem. your pad chords: they're too raw and basic, it makes it souns really cheesy. you have the 1, 3, 5 major notes on the chords and imo it just doesnt sound good. fortunately this is super easy to fix: experiment with different notes.
fixing one of the breaks
nice and chilling, i love this
I think this is as good as it's going to get
fixing pad + chords
Deffo some weird chords going on. Fixing
Not sure how much I like the pad
vvv you meant that for my wall
very very pretty
Daw the name, the beginning is like yasssss, the plucks!!!!
percs are on POINT
<3
Ty for tips. Will make edits when possible
good composition. The bass could be a bit more prominent imo.
Damn, so clean
Finally rob getting some good attention
really clean