Great track!
It does feel a bit empty so what I would do is make the kicks loud (not too loud) and add like an 808 or something or add another device to make it feel less empty
But overall good job!
Jul 12, 24
Beautiful track !
Jul 10, 24
I really like how this started, but I felt disappointed by the first drop at . The rest of the track after that absolutely lacks energy and feeling. A bit disappointing, tbh.
Add more higher energy sounds, pads, strings, brass, something, anything. It's just dead in the water rn :(
Sorry I know this sounds harsh, but I was REALLY on board for the first 20 seconds and I had unusually high expectations because of where I thought the track was going.
Jul 10, 24
You can leave it open for remix, and maybe I'll come around to it someday if you don't :P
Jul 10, 24
If you want to work on, i can invite you with a big pleasure
Jul 10, 24
Unfortunately it didn't get anywhere close to where I thought it was going and that may just have been your artistic choice. Nevertheless, there's just not enough here for me to sink my teeth into :\
Jul 10, 24
I know you're french and you have problems with English, but I think you wanted to say "When I'm looking at you"?
so so so so good
Great track! It does feel a bit empty so what I would do is make the kicks loud (not too loud) and add like an 808 or something or add another device to make it feel less empty But overall good job!
Beautiful track !
I really like how this started, but I felt disappointed by the first drop at . The rest of the track after that absolutely lacks energy and feeling. A bit disappointing, tbh. Add more higher energy sounds, pads, strings, brass, something, anything. It's just dead in the water rn :( Sorry I know this sounds harsh, but I was REALLY on board for the first 20 seconds and I had unusually high expectations because of where I thought the track was going.
I know you're french and you have problems with English, but I think you wanted to say "When I'm looking at you"?