Clemency

ØutOfBounds
250 Dec 21, 20 Drum & Bass
0:00 / 3:39
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First attempt at dnb. I really enjoyed making this and I am really proud of this. Anyone who can pls give crit and please enjoy. :)

         
Jan 5, 21

I know im late for this but this is so good and since i haven't done any thumbs up in 2 weeks

Jan 5, 21

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Jan 5, 21

oo. this is awesome. i think u gotta control your high frequencies a bit more. it kinda gets out of control in some places. also the lightning is really loud sometimes. but this is so cool. really great seeing more drum and bass lately. u have inspired me to make dnb now lol.

Jan 5, 21

i think the first drop needs a proper build up tho

Dec 24, 20

Ayy this charted!

Dec 23, 20

Man you should do dnb again :D Maybe cullab sometime?

Dec 23, 20

maybe lol

Dec 23, 20

Noice :D

Dec 22, 20

This is really clean bro! Good to hear some more dnb on here in this style. Love the middle break. I replied to your other comments :)

Dec 22, 20

Big love <3

Dec 22, 20

Ty <3

Dec 21, 20

"Hard and fast"

Dec 21, 20

That's what she said

Dec 21, 20

Still a really good track though, man.

Dec 21, 20

Ty very much!

Dec 21, 20

Not really a fan of the melody, doesn't really feel natural, but that's something you can easily learn to work on. That saw that comes in @ is REALLY harsh on the ears, maybe lower the volume a bit and control the high freqs. The rest of the intro is pretty nice, I like the use of the ambiance samples. The drop is actually really nice, I love the saw bass, and the lead is pretty cool despite the weird chord melody. The post drop also seems bit plain, and the 2nd build could be better.

Dec 21, 20

Ty for the crit <3 I will def practice more!

Dec 21, 20

Ayoo man this is fire :D

Dec 21, 20

Ty man <3

Dec 21, 20

The kick needs more low-end in my opinion. There's a 'click' each time it hits in a section of the song. to and could use some swiping in the frequencies because it's some elements you don't need pushed in the song that can interfere with other instruments. Maybe a few more layers of the sub bass could push the song to new heights? I like what you got going here btw, it takes the cake for a supported festival song.