yeah i did change the chords instead of staying the same; by making it into a progression at the beginnning building tension. I didn't think it was off key but that was probably cuz i had listened to it so much, i thought it was good. cuz it happens to me sometimes. Thanks for ur opinion and feedback :)
my main idea was to try and make what I thought was better. And yes you are right, I just wanted this to be a mini project. Do you think this is better or worse than the original?