The drums could have more presence, kick and bass could have more sub. Some of the synths, particularly the "chord" sound too raw for my taste. That is, it sounds like a bare sawtooth waveform. Perhaps could be stereodetuned and have some filter effects on it.
I noticed that "Melody 1" and "Melody 2" are playing the same thing, for the most part. Something worth considering would be to use a note splitter.
Feb 20, 18
I never thought anyone would care enough to open it in Next. I'm a big fan of you, by the way :)
Feb 20, 18
Melody 2 is supposed to be a harmony melody line with Melody 1. Thanks soooo much for the feedback!
Feb 18, 18
straight off the bat, you shouldnt have reverb on that kick, i get what youre going for but at least eq some of the muddiness out of it. This track is also lacking in a lot of lowend, there should be a sub in the drop for instance. Cool melodies in this tho! :)
Feb 19, 18
Just be mindful of the frequencies being taken up in your mix by synths/instruments (:
Feb 19, 18
How do you make your synths sound so clean?
Feb 19, 18
(:
Feb 19, 18
Thank you for your criticism!
Feb 18, 18
i didn't even know you can use one entry for two contests.
Feb 18, 18
Haha LOL
Feb 18, 18
this is nice.
Feb 18, 18
sorry, AT day 2017 has closed since january
republished
Jan 1, 18
Reorganized machines, as well as final touches.
Dec 25, 17
V2.0 COMING SOON!
Dec 3, 17
[Preview]
Dec 2, 17
This is awesome, sounds like the mystery box from Mario kart oss, lmao.
Almost 50!
TOFOKA says: Good ******* job bruh
I like the second part
The drums could have more presence, kick and bass could have more sub. Some of the synths, particularly the "chord" sound too raw for my taste. That is, it sounds like a bare sawtooth waveform. Perhaps could be stereodetuned and have some filter effects on it. I noticed that "Melody 1" and "Melody 2" are playing the same thing, for the most part. Something worth considering would be to use a note splitter.
straight off the bat, you shouldnt have reverb on that kick, i get what youre going for but at least eq some of the muddiness out of it. This track is also lacking in a lot of lowend, there should be a sub in the drop for instance. Cool melodies in this tho! :)
i didn't even know you can use one entry for two contests.
this is nice.
sorry, AT day 2017 has closed since january
Reorganized machines, as well as final touches.
V2.0 COMING SOON!
[Preview]
This is awesome, sounds like the mystery box from Mario kart oss, lmao.