i would work on some of the notes of the flute and the synth that comes in at
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bc some of them sound off a little, also turn down the lfo speed on the flute cuz i think it's too fast, and also turn the lows down a little (like -3db) on the snare in pre w/ curve (not post bc you have the reverb) a lot of the drums you have don't work well w/ each other also, i hear a ride and a crash that are acoustic while everything else is electronic (made w/ a synthesizer)
also the reason why i told you to turn the melody and counter-melodies up is so the drums (and their mixing like reverb and such) appear to sound quieter but is really the same volume as it was, just covered up by the things you need to really pay attention to