quick 30 min track...i came into this plannin on doing a fast upbeat track...but i dont control them...i just kinda fiddle around and the tracks come together themselves...its very hard for me to pick wat kinda track im gonna do...which is why my track "i dare you" was so hard because there was a certain sound i wanted...so ya..
nice work on the chop. this really works well. i love tracks that i have to listen to a couple times to get the real feel on. like this one. the groove is there all the time only sometimes it is sneakier than me and i have to hunt the funker down. yeah. really works.
ya drums seem off and i would lower frequency on e.b tracking down maybe..octaves, or something on that one really high synth. and maybe make a more melodical track instead of seperate lines of notes irrelevant to each other it just seems really random and unpredictable. try making chords and within those chords make the higher synth follow the notes in the chord.