Perfect Sphere

RDz
903 May 12, 13 Trance
0:00 / 4:01
68
Trance uplifting trance

My first actual attempt, so feedback please! Inspired by Notoz, Inavon, Sota etc. Also, school's done so I can focus more on improving my music.

         
Mikke
Sep 13, 13

wow lovely acid track!

RDz
Jun 9, 13

Thanks Dei :)

Dei Servus
Jun 6, 13

I also like the highpass effects at the breaks. always one of my favorite parts of this music. great job!

Dei Servus
Jun 6, 13

Love the perc in the begginnig. but not a fan of the facotory sounds/ percs. I not a fan of the basline too much either. the pad is very nice for this type of music. reminds me of oldschool techno and trance. I have no problem with it really. I can definently tell how inavon inspired this. the "chorus" is alot better than I excpected thugh!!! great job! love the piano too!

RDz
May 20, 13

Thanks KrazieKammie and Julia :)

RDz
May 18, 13

Thanks guys :D and Niko Thanks a lot for the feedback! I'll leave this track alone for now but I'll consider your advice for my next trance track ;)

Korvent
May 18, 13

This track is amazing!! But i think it's more acid trace than uplifting trance but it's not important!! Excellent track!!

Niko
May 18, 13

Great composition, although you could have made the segment before the breakdown longer. It feels as if you made this too radio friendly if you know what I mean :) Make this segment longer and add some repitition. It could also need a rolling bassline to help with this. The 303 is great, however I'm not fan of the supersaw pad, it is over used. Other than that, I like this. It's got a very good flow.

ShoKKPoynT
May 18, 13

i like the 303 and the arp and the pads. this ROCKS

almate
May 18, 13

Once this song got to the pads, I knew this was going to be a good and true trance song. This song is too perfect! You've successfully made another song that's amazing! Keep making amazing tracks Onyx!

Kamaro
May 17, 13

wow, rly gooood job :)

Austin Schoessow
May 17, 13

all id have to say is add some voice like some in the future like robotic human voice at about around 48 seconds in but besides that its almost album ready just extend your wobble a little longer that's my advice

LowFeel
May 16, 13

wow,nice track man!

cripta
May 16, 13

nice one...i'm not a big fan of the trance melodic part... but big fan of the acid part :)

Deth_Meth
May 16, 13

If this was your first actual attempt, then how far can your awesomeness go? O_o

RDz
May 16, 13

Cheers dude, glad you like it :)

Daymo
May 16, 13

2.20 is amazing too

Daymo
May 16, 13

0.28 instantfav

RDz
May 16, 13

And Zone :P