Also the sub is missing, because of how deep it is. Saturate it a bit, and then take out like 300hz with a notch
Tbh with you, no it's not as good as you think it is. The mix isn't your best, and there's like nothing in the low mids and mids. If you'd like to vc someday, I could teach you how to make bass shots, and cinematic synth impacts and shit