Im new here :)

I just want some constructive criticism to help to get myself going on here :)

also please dont fire all of your At jargon at me-i will DEFINITELY not understand.

thanks again everyone and especially gravidon :D

i just hope you like it.

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  • cringe

    • Be proud of that cringe. Someone has to be, lol. ^-^

  • synthinox ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

  • yo this is alright tbh

  • XDDD

  • this cracks me up every time

  • real throwback

  • Still better than me

    I cry now

  • fs only good song ive ever made

  • If I heard this beforehand, I would've known sooner you'd be a prodigy...

  • lel

  • Holy crep 1 year!

  • Thank you for the comments, they really help :)

  • This is great, but maybe you should remove some snares on the beat of the drop. Dnb sounds nicer when you use less kicks and snares

  • Republished

    Tweaked synths+Reduced snare+Another octave on pulv sub bass

  • Melodically, this is flawless. I think you should just spend a while going over the synths you've made, just tweak them until it sounds a bit more like the ones in the track. Also, maybe take out a few of the snare beats in the drop? I think they kinda drown everything out