I know I say this everytime but this is my best, no question
Spent a few weeks making this and the mix ended up so clean
Please crit harshly
First time i've tried to make a "bridge" sort of section, tell me if it's good ()
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Will be out on spotify soon
slight mixing and mastering changes
volume boost (+5.5 dB)
Jun 16, 18
re-mixing and re-mastering because fucking booster has different compression and dynamics to pubbed
Jun 17, 18
I'm glad I'm not the only one who notices this
Jun 16, 18
I think it drones on a bit too much, as mentioned before many MANY times. I'd suggest perhaps a key change in the second chorus, and some different chords for a change in the bridge, and/or even the part right after the first chorus. Then, along with some sound fine-tuning and drum sample changes perhaps, you're good to go!
Jun 15, 18
You know what would be perfect with this? A piano.
Jun 15, 18
>:)
Jun 11, 18
I would emphasize on the highs, like most future bass songs. its a bit heavy on low end, in order to balance the rest of the track out. other than that, its rreally good. I couldnt make future bass, so your better than me. But thats the only real problem i see. Tune your mastering so that its more focued on the Highs.
Jun 11, 18
Consider these carefully and you get Marble Soda. Put them on autopilot and you get Otter Pop.
Jun 11, 18
Hinestly i think this advice leads to really generic future bass. The real problem is that there is little variety in phrasing. Future bass is at its best when it handles phrasing in unexpected ways. What is phrasing, you ask? Its an abstract concept essentially regarding how you craft a musical statement. How does your use of rhythm, harmony, melody, countermelody, and other elements contribute to a musical statement? What are the points of tension and relaxation? Treat it like language.
Jun 11, 18
To crit harshly, the mastering is not the best. the volume is very low. the kick is very weak. since future bass is just trap with chords, try using a trap snare. oh wait, I think u are using their samples! XD Rides make everything better. Try using them. :D That snare is clipping a lot. Your synths lack distortion. In the drop when the chords and lead breaks, use filler basses, reverb, or FX. Try using an arp in the drop, making sure to sidechain it. Arps really do drown out the drums.
Jun 21, 18
"Future Bass is just trap with chords." I dont think I've heard anything this objectively wrong from someone I have this much respect for in years.
Jun 11, 18
the mastering is not the best i said. I mean making it not sound like it's made in a cardboard box. It's almost like everything is mono.
Jun 11, 18
your chords are definitely less cheesy than mine. I have to make dark a$$ future bass just make non-cheesy chords.
republished
Jun 10, 18
make sure to listen at high volume because audiotool loves fucking compressing everything i make
Jun 10, 18
The synth that comes in at around the mark.. has an irritating vibrato sound to it. The snares around the same point are very generic. The intro is way better at this point, that clock like snare is much nicer and the arp/chord is soothing.
at you bring it all in. this new snare is better than the second one..bit heavier, more substantial. the chords though are super bland. It sounds like you're trying to mix a prog house/trancey edm thing with melodic dubstep.
Beautiful.
phat new cover art
beautiful
maybe pitch up the snare a little. :00000
yeet its fixed
slight mixing and mastering changes volume boost (+5.5 dB)
re-mixing and re-mastering because fucking booster has different compression and dynamics to pubbed
I think it drones on a bit too much, as mentioned before many MANY times. I'd suggest perhaps a key change in the second chorus, and some different chords for a change in the bridge, and/or even the part right after the first chorus. Then, along with some sound fine-tuning and drum sample changes perhaps, you're good to go!
You know what would be perfect with this? A piano.
>:)
I would emphasize on the highs, like most future bass songs. its a bit heavy on low end, in order to balance the rest of the track out. other than that, its rreally good. I couldnt make future bass, so your better than me. But thats the only real problem i see. Tune your mastering so that its more focued on the Highs.
To crit harshly, the mastering is not the best. the volume is very low. the kick is very weak. since future bass is just trap with chords, try using a trap snare. oh wait, I think u are using their samples! XD Rides make everything better. Try using them. :D That snare is clipping a lot. Your synths lack distortion. In the drop when the chords and lead breaks, use filler basses, reverb, or FX. Try using an arp in the drop, making sure to sidechain it. Arps really do drown out the drums.
your chords are definitely less cheesy than mine. I have to make dark a$$ future bass just make non-cheesy chords.
make sure to listen at high volume because audiotool loves fucking compressing everything i make
The synth that comes in at around the mark.. has an irritating vibrato sound to it. The snares around the same point are very generic. The intro is way better at this point, that clock like snare is much nicer and the arp/chord is soothing. at you bring it all in. this new snare is better than the second one..bit heavier, more substantial. the chords though are super bland. It sounds like you're trying to mix a prog house/trancey edm thing with melodic dubstep.