last/?

...

warmth and comfort,

one night insomniac...

a leap into an abyss

of colours and happiness

...

Look what I have found!

not a speck of darkness.

hours of trial and error

are finally ripe to harvest

...

a sky full of stars,

I swim in an ocean

full of fish and corals

a relief from all caution.

...

so I drift away,

far from the shore

to never find borders...

anywhere, anymore.

IDK people, please leave some criticism on this. Got something quite big coming soon. c:

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  • Beauti

  • I'm going to change a few little things, add another synth and this is going to be album-ready. It's not going to be perfect, but to be honest, that's not what I want anymore anyways.

  • i lke it!!!

  • my apologies for not listening to this beautiful song sooner

    • its completely fine, thank you for calling it beatiful ^_^

  • This is alluring.

    Don't get yourself down, don't doubt yourself... we could all make improvements.. What matters is that you feel for your music and that you don't stop working and experimenting for the sounds that you want to achieve. It's certainly been a struggle to get to the point where I'm happy with what I make. Trust me, there's always gonna be a few tracks that you're completely in love with.. but you just can't develop them any further. It's irritating I know, but it happens :)

    • thank you so much

    • If you've made this piece inspired from listening to my silly music then you've got a lot of potential. Looking forward to see what you get up to in the future

  • I wish this could go somewhere else, but it's not Good enough :(

    • I guess I don't spend enough time developing these projects, I'm disappointed of myself :c

  • Now this is beautiful

  • the poem makes me smile :)